This collection of fifty or so poems is actually made up of three smaller collections. The first, “Once Upon a Time Please”, contains only three poems I would want to return to again and again. “Berlin 29/1/33”, “Both Sides”, and this one:
In one room of a damned metropolis
a lonely madman works on a plan.
In an all-night corner coffee bar
a statistic prays for one last fix.
Under frozen branches in black park
pale fingers fumble with elastic.
Twelve inches away from the late-night news
a myopic spinster weeps in colour.
Someone somewhere begins a letter
to anyone’s silent son or daughter.
The third collection, “Lines from No Man’s Land”, seems to be about a failed marriage. It is simply a poet whingeing, therapeutic writing, and probably better left unpublished.
However – and I do hope you are still with me, for this is a big however – the second collection, “Love Should Be”, is a series of gems in which the poet sees and feels and notes in perfectly crafted lines what others see but lack the imagination to feel or the will, or the skill, to note. As I say, they are all gems, but I must draw attention to “Do You Need Love?”, and to “Escape”
They found him eventually, of course:
face down in a stinking ditch, hidden by
bracken and gorse and bramble. After more
than thirty barred and bolted years, a dim
number became a public name, four terse
lines in the local paper conceding
him existence posthumously. I’m glad
he died outside, pleased he at least clawed back
that week to himself, that one lousy week
in an antiseptic lifetime, defied
those grim samaritans with needles full
of reason, eluded their muscular
compassion, electric understanding.
Yes, they found him in the end, the sick one,
the freak, the mad thief who stole one whole week
and spent it all. I see sane eyes above
neat uniforms beside that rotting ditch,
hear thoughts in trained minds click like rusted locks.
And finally, my own personal favourite from this whole collection, a six-star poem if ever there was one, “Wheat Field With Crows (for Vincent and too many others)” – the Vincent being, of course, Vincent van Gogh. It is perfect.